So, first off: The Writing irritated me, because it was just not flowing. Not one bit and I just couldn't get into the story. Now, my bigger problem: If it is supposed to be a comedy, write it as a comedy. This? It's way over the top, surreal at times - which would be fine for slapstick or parody, not a comedy. Yes, there is a difference. But it is not a parody. Because for that it is too... sincere, maybe? Or trying to be? Trying to hard? All I can say: Book, you take yourself too seriously to be a parody, and no, that does not make you a comedy. Nope, it was anall around a no-go for me, sorry.